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Evani
Elven Ranger of the chaotic good alighnment

Bio
Evani spent all of his life with over neglactive parents, and relatives. His father (named Teliner), a powerful Mage who spent most of his time in seclusion for study, and his mother(named Magiya), was a bard, she was always gone into the human taverns along the sword coast telling story after story. Since his parents were never around he spent most of his time with his uncle(named Caliner), who was on the fathers side of the family. Caliner was a thought as a disgrace to the rest of the family except for Evani. He was disliked by them because he was a crude ranger, most of the family is the silent type, and all of them are wizards except for Magiya, but she can cast wizard spells so they dont mind the fact that she is a Bard. Evani, spending so much time with his crude uncle was an insperation to him. Caliner and Evani went on many walks together, and Caliner even started teaching Evani the way of the ranger. One night Caliner broke into Evani's family home, he woke Evani in the night with a look of desperation on his face, his pant leg was ripped and he had blood tricking down his leg. Evani asked what happened and he said their is no time. Pulling Evani from his bed he rushed him out of the window and into the forest. They ran all night until Caliner stopped him, he was winded and was still bleeding. They rested for an hour and Evani inspected his uncles wound, it was a deep laceration, it appeared to be from a claw. After asking Caliner again what had happened Caliner explained that displacer beasts have been showing up in the town at night, and he spent the night hunting one he had seen the day before, he explained that he tracked one to a cave that led into the underdark. After he followed it down into the warm tunnels he was ambused by a half spider, half drow (drider) it clawed and raked at him, since it was dark and it all happened so fast he rushed out. Caliner then told on his way back he noticed holes in his arms, and small black things...spiders...all over his body, Caliner brused himself off wildly and ran straight to Evani. After explaining the story to Evani, he asked, why me? Why come to me? I am but 17 years old! I am a child! Caliner explained, you are the last in are family who know the way of the ranger. I have little to almost no knowledge on it! Said Evani, but Caliner just shrugged his cry away and said that they spent so much time together and he can see the ranger in him. At that they both stood up and started walking, they walked all the next day, Caliner told Evani that they are headed to Longsaddle, to get the attention of the Harpell's. As night set in again they found a small clearing, they made a bed out of dead pine needles and both fell asleep almost instantly. Upon waking up Evani looked about, but his uncle was gone, in his place was a note....it read
Evani
Your uncle is now at with us.
We took your uncle because of...a small item, in his pack. It is none of your buisness what it is, or why we are willing to capture someone for such an artifact, you may ask, why not just take the item and leave us alone? Well, we cant answer that, just know that if you ever enter a human city, I have contacts their who know who you are and will attack you on sight, and never, go near the underdark, my pets will get you if you even get near, tell not a soul of this happening, or you will be hunted.

So now, evani is far from home, has no idea how to get back, its a new forest that he has never been in, he has but a small dagger, a sshort bow and four arrows, is Evani to go home and listen to the letter? or will he look into the capture of his uncle, and what power this artifact has....

 

I dont know how to get into ALFA, this is just a character I thought up of, should I submit into ALFA? Is my character fit what is needed, I really dont know the requirements, its just someone for me to use in single player and multi player, I think a good bio and an idea on your characters personality multiplys the possibilitys and level of entertainment, but should I try to get into ALFA?