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Read my poem, please!

Discussion in 'Creativity Surge' started by herf, Jan 7, 2001.

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  1. herf Guest

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    [​IMG] ok people, read my poem, and email me with what you think it is about, do not say on the message boards what the poem means, please, my email is "imherf@yahoo.com"

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    my tears are drying,
    in the hope that it will come,
    anxiousness, hope,
    it will be here soon.

    it breaks out of the ground,
    dragging and pushing the fingers,
    the fingers that caress and warm my face,
    it gives me joy and happiness.

    it leaps high overhead,
    dropping many fingers,
    the fingers that i like so much,
    they bring me smiles to wear.

    it starts to fall,
    i am worried,
    the joy and happiness stats to fade,
    the depression settles in.

    it sinks into the grounds cellar,
    there are no more fingers,
    i am very depressed,
    the absence-of-light is frightnening.

    the faces emerge,
    they wink and laugh at me,
    they make me cry,
    i hide my tears in my arms.

    daniel herfield copyrights this poem january fith 2001, any unwarranted use of this poem will be dealt with severely and with the use of the justice court.

    [This message has been edited by herf (edited January 07, 2001).]
     
    herf, Jan 7, 2001
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    What? Why do you want us to tell you what it means?
     
    Evil Sniper, Jan 7, 2001
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  3. herf Guest

    [​IMG] i wrote it but i want to see if people can see what it means, ony my best friend and my english teacher figured it out, i sent it of to mensa a week ago and i am expecting a reply(i asked what iq you needed to figure out what it means)
     
    herf, Jan 7, 2001
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    I see...I'll get Sniper to do that!
     
    Evil Sniper, Jan 7, 2001
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  5. herf Guest

    thanx!
     
    herf, Jan 7, 2001
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    He is after all weakened from the formation of thyself...And will be a good many moons for him to recooperate...By then he shall be mine...
     
    Evil Sniper, Jan 7, 2001
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  7. herf Guest

    [​IMG] take over the feeble sniper and force him to serve our master, the everlasting lucifer, the bearer of the evil light!!
     
    herf, Jan 7, 2001
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    None shall ever control me...not even the Prime Evils from the very bottom of hell! And i ask Taluntain and Syl to guide me and protect me until the final showdown...
     
    Sniper, Jan 7, 2001
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    You're kidding right? I think you only showed it to your best friend and English teacher if they're the only ones who figured it out...

    Oh, but nice poem just the same... :)

    [This message has been edited by Blackthorne TA (edited January 07, 2001).]
     
    Blackthorne TA, Jan 7, 2001
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  10. herf Guest

    [​IMG] i have showed it to about 20 people, seriously, go on then, tell us what you think it means!
     
    herf, Jan 7, 2001
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    Blackthorne TA Master in his Own Mind Staff Member ★ SPS Account Holder Adored Veteran Pillars of Eternity SP Immortalizer (for helping immortalize Sorcerer's Place in the game!) New Server Contributor [2012] (for helping Sorcerer's Place lease a new, more powerful server!) Torment: Tides of Numenera SP Immortalizer (for helping immortalize Sorcerer's Place in the game!)

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    OK... Seems to me you're talking about the cycle of the day... Waiting for the sun to come up to warm you with its rays then the sun going down and the stars coming out...
     
    Blackthorne TA, Jan 7, 2001
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  12. herf Guest

    [​IMG] very good, what do you think of the actual poem? do you think it is good or bad?
     
    herf, Jan 7, 2001
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    [​IMG] Like I said above... Nice! :)
     
    Blackthorne TA, Jan 7, 2001
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    Yes yes...very nice and personified...
     
    Evil Sniper, Jan 7, 2001
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    no one id corrupting sniper! not if i join the battle!
     
    The Fat Egg, Jan 8, 2001
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    [​IMG] sniper will die, me and evil sniper shall kill him!!
     
    herf, Jan 8, 2001
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    Too hard to read when music is on.

    The Decline is too good to stop.

    Sorry, can't read it.

    btw The Decline is 18 Minutes long so I won't wait till it finishes either.
     
    Septic Yogurt, Jan 8, 2001
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    Don't fret my friends i am not corrupt...Evil Sniper is!

    So once more unto the breach my friends!

    *Runs off to find a place to snipe in cover*
     
    Sniper, Jan 8, 2001
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    /me puts a nad spike where sniper will snipe from.
     
    Septic Yogurt, Jan 8, 2001
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    i will be there to help!
     
    The Fat Egg, Jan 10, 2001
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