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Marco Volo

Discussion in 'Creativity Surge' started by Smyther, Sep 14, 2004.

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    Good show. Keep it up.

    And you. Yeah, you, the other people reading this story. Tell the author what you think. Review, or so help me, I shall find out who you are, and make monkey jokes about your families.
     
    Jaguar, Oct 25, 2004
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    [ December 24, 2004, 06:22: Message edited by: Smyther ]
     
    Smyther, Oct 27, 2004
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    The poems rocked man. Especially the one about school, which was clever and I had to read out loud.

    Now the plot comes together, and the question is will Blackjack carry out his orders, which are now obviously directed by money.
     
    Jaguar, Oct 28, 2004
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    Smyther, Nov 5, 2004
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    Keep it up. It was good to see a battle between alot of the people met along the way. I expect good things to come of this story.
     
    Jaguar, Nov 7, 2004
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    Smyther, Nov 13, 2004
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    /me applauds

    I am really enjoying this story. Especially the way you try to stay true to the Realms. Keep it up.
     
    Jaguar, Nov 15, 2004
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    Good chapter, though I was slightly trown off in a few places with the use of Volo for both men.
     
    Jaguar, Nov 26, 2004
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    Well, that was different. Nice to see that it all wrapped up neatly with a twist. Kind of anti-climactic though.
     
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    How so, Jag? The gods coming in? That's part of the original story. I'm open to suggestions, especially if they add more content to Part 3. Actually, I'm open to any new content at all, any suggestions. But stuff for part 1 and 3 is really appreciated. Any ideas on where the story can go next? I plan on a sequel or two, and the next one should definately involve the revenge of Rau'Triel Luen.
    Any comments from other people? Surely there are other people reading this.
    Oh well, for now I'm off to the Bioware boards to participate in the House of Drow story. Expect ideas of my own to be generated from this.
     
    Smyther, Dec 2, 2004
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